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Something about me.
I graduated a Univeristy, so I'am graduate.
My parents are proud of me that I did this.
Now, I have holidays, so i rest and in my free time i learn english because in future I want work in a big company.

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- Something about me.
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- I graduated a Univeristy, so I'am graduate.
  투표하세요!
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- My parents are proud of me that I did this.
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- Now, I have holidays, so i rest and in my free time i learn english because in future I want work in a big company.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3