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Dear Dr. ...
First of all I want to thank you for answer.
I hope for a good and long cooperation between our two companies.
This week we spent for economic calculation and market`s research.
There are a lot of offer in shops between 1 and 1,5 euro per pack of (name).
It will be our price too if we pay 0,69 euro per kilo (calculations in excel included).
This is a segment with intense competition (about 10 brand).
But segment with prices from 0,8 to 0,9 approximately free of competitors (only 1-2).
Please, consider the possibility to set the price on 0,55 Euro per kilo.
Yours sincerely, Name, Company name, country

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- First of all I want to thank you for answer.
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- I hope for a good and long cooperation between our two companies.
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- This week we spent for economic calculation and market`s research.
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- There are a lot of offer in shops between 1 and 1,5 euro per pack of (name).
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- It will be our price too if we pay 0,69 euro per kilo (calculations in excel included).
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- This is a segment with intense competition (about 10 brand).
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- But segment with prices from 0,8 to 0,9 approximately free of competitors (only 1-2).
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- Please, consider the possibility to set the price on 0,55 Euro per kilo.
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- Yours sincerely, Name, Company name, country
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