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Mosquito
Yesterday I came to my work earlier than other.
For fifteen minutes I sat at my work place and suddenly I saw a big mosquito!
It has long thin legs and thin ugly body.
It was half dead and could not fly.
So, it crawled on my table just in front of me!
I am frightened of most of insects and I feel a great fear to touch them and slay them.
I cannot murder them by paper or shoes.
When I see a cockroach, I turn back and wait when it go out...
So, when I found the mosquito on my table I was paralized and waited when my colleagues came and slay this thing.
But soon the mosquito fell down on the floor and disappeared from my view.

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- Mosquito
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- Yesterday I came to my work earlier than other.
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Sentence 2
- For fifteen minutes I sat at my work place and suddenly I saw a big mosquito!
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- It has long thin legs and thin ugly body.
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- It was half dead and could not fly.
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- So, it crawled on my table just in front of me!
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- I am frightened of most of insects and I feel a great fear to touch them and slay them.
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- I cannot murder them by paper or shoes.
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- When I see a cockroach, I turn back and wait when it go out...
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- So, when I found the mosquito on my table I was paralized and waited when my colleagues came and slay this thing.
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Sentence 10
- But soon the mosquito fell down on the floor and disappeared from my view.
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