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about me
hello!
i'm Mariestelly. I'm 17.
i live in avignon for my dancer studies..
next year i will go to aix en provence, to the letter's university.
i am not very happy but i don't know what i want to do, so i am going to search for one year.
i just know that i enjoy lenguages, i would speak english very well, although there is a big work!!

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- i'm Mariestelly. I'm 17.
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- i live in avignon for my dancer studies..
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- next year i will go to aix en provence, to the letter's university.
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- i am not very happy but i don't know what i want to do, so i am going to search for one year.
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