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  • In The Zoo

  • Hi evry body There are many and several kind of animals in the zoo but my favorite is a lion, it's looks very awesome, but becarful it's a most dangerause animal, so when you go to see animals in the zoo keep some destance from their its more safe and don't give it to eat it's very bad for their health.

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    • Hi evry body There are many and several kind of animals in the zoo but my favorite is a lion, it's looks very awesome, but becarful it's a most dangerause animal, so when you go to see animals in the zoo keep some destance from their its more safe and don't give it to eat it's very bad for their health.
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