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My holidays
Today, I start my internship, my holiday is finished.
It was very nice, I was with my family and we had many travel, we visited more old city and did the ramble at the montains of Pelvoux.
Now I have to focus in my career and be ready for the start of my studies. Thanks !

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- My holidays
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- Today, I start my internship, my holiday is finished.
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- It was very nice, I was with my family and we had many travel, we visited more old city and did the ramble at the montains of Pelvoux.
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- Now I have to focus in my career and be ready for the start of my studies. Thanks !
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