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English
hi every one!
English is very beautiful language and ti is very useful. the english language is very importante for me, because it is the first practise language in the world ,and it's langauge of knowledge.the english language alowed me to know a new persone in the world.
Iam an ancounter, and I wish when I can practise english very well, I'll get a good job in interrnational firm.

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句子 1
- hi every one!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- English is very beautiful language and ti is very useful. the english language is very importante for me, because it is the first practise language in the world ,and it's langauge of knowledge.the english language alowed me to know a new persone in the world.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Iam an ancounter, and I wish when I can practise english very well, I'll get a good job in interrnational firm.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3