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English language and me
Hello everyone, I would like to improve my english to be able to speak to everybody all over the world.
I need to learn vocabulary and some grammar I think.
I went to san Francisco during 5 months and Miami for 3 months.
I would like to work with US and others countries.
For that, I need to speak English everyday and I'm looking for people who can correct me when I make mistake and to learn subtilities of english language.
Thanks everybody and see ya !

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- Hello everyone, I would like to improve my english to be able to speak to everybody all over the world.
  투표하세요!
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문장 2
- I need to learn vocabulary and some grammar I think.
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- I went to san Francisco during 5 months and Miami for 3 months.
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문장 4
- I would like to work with US and others countries.
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- For that, I need to speak English everyday and I'm looking for people who can correct me when I make mistake and to learn subtilities of english language.
  투표하세요!
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- Thanks everybody and see ya !
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