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Most Enjoyable
I think Beaches is most enjoyable in the Word because swim in the sea in a fun activity.
There is sun a lot and sand in the beach.
İn the summer day everyone go to the nearest beach.
Because people want to become cool themselves.

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- I think Beaches is most enjoyable in the Word because swim in the sea in a fun activity.
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- There is sun a lot and sand in the beach.
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- İn the summer day everyone go to the nearest beach.
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- Because people want to become cool themselves.
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