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  • My frist composition for you

  • Hello everybody!
  • I want to learn english because i will leave in australia.
  • I'm going to Purth, weast cost of australian continent.
  • When i'm in Purth i will studie english and work a lot.
  • I want to meet people, first woman.
  • Sory my text is terrible...
  • I love you all !!!!

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