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Văn bản từ AntonioFisk - English

  • Fancy yourself as an interviewer?

  • If I had the chance, I would like to interview Ville Valo, the singer of H.I.M.
  • Since I started playing guitar, I have always listened to H.I.M. and I have always liked their music.
  • I got know H.I.M. from a friend, she lent me a CD and I really enjoyed it, then I had a search on the web and found out more information about them and Ville Valo.
  • I find Ville Valo a very interesting person.
  • I don’t only consider Ville Valo as a singer, I also appreciate him for his impressive writing skills, the songs he writes are very deep and romantic, sometimes a bit depressive and malinconic.
  • I really like his look, in particolar his hairstyle, he often changes his haircut.
  • First of all, I would ask him where he gets ispiration for writing his songs, I can’ t imagine how difficult could be writing texts when you are in tour, playing and performing even in different countries, that’ s a very stressful life.
  • I would also ask him what has been the most beautiful place where he played.
  • On the 9th of October I am going to a concert in Milano with some friends, so I would like to know if he likes Italy and Italian fans.
  • I guess every singer has a preferred place where to play.
  • Then I would like to know if, when he was young, he had ever thought of being a singer or it only happened for chance.
  • I habe been singing and playing guitar since I was a child, but I have always asked myself if I will ever have success in my life.
  • It’s really hard and it needs dedication and even a bit of luck.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • I got know H.I.M. from a friend, she lent me a CD and I really enjoyed it, then I had a search on the web and found out more information about them and Ville Valo.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • I don’t only consider Ville Valo as a singer, I also appreciate him for his impressive writing skills, the songs he writes are very deep and romantic, sometimes a bit depressive and malinconic.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • First of all, I would ask him where he gets ispiration for writing his songs, I can’ t imagine how difficult could be writing texts when you are in tour, playing and performing even in different countries, that’ s a very stressful life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • On the 9th of October I am going to a concert in Milano with some friends, so I would like to know if he likes Italy and Italian fans.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • Then I would like to know if, when he was young, he had ever thought of being a singer or it only happened for chance.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • I habe been singing and playing guitar since I was a child, but I have always asked myself if I will ever have success in my life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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