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  • Leaving my lovely island

  • These days I feel happy and sad at the same time.The reason is I was admitted to a competition, I don't know if it's the right word, so I have to leave my island to undergo a vocational training and work in France and live there for a while.
  • Leaving everyone I know here makes me feel sad but I have to be optimistic it will be a great experience for me.
  • However, it will be easier for me to travel in Europe, going to Great Britain again.Even if I'm still looking for English speakers to help me to improve my English.
  • Have a nice day everyone.

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    • These days I feel happy and sad at the same time.The reason is I was admitted to a competition, I don't know if it's the right word, so I have to leave my island to undergo a vocational training and work in France and live there for a while.
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    • Leaving everyone I know here makes me feel sad but I have to be optimistic it will be a great experience for me.
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    • However, it will be easier for me to travel in Europe, going to Great Britain again.Even if I'm still looking for English speakers to help me to improve my English.
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