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My love
One month ago I met my boyfriend.
He's amazing boy.
I felt in love with him.
But we have one big problem.
We live in different cities of our big country. I love him.

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- My love
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句子 1
- One month ago I met my boyfriend.
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句子 2
- He's amazing boy.
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句子 3
- I felt in love with him.
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- But we have one big problem.
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句子 5
- We live in different cities of our big country. I love him.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5