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Help!
Between one year i would like go to live in London.
I think that have my family distant is terrible but haven't future is worse!
I must improve my english after go in London.

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- Help!
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句子 1
- Between one year i would like go to live in London.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I think that have my family distant is terrible but haven't future is worse!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I must improve my english after go in London.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3