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Introduction
Hi, everyone.
I'm a new here, and my purpose is to improve my English.
In my school I don't have many chances to communicate with native speakers.
Is it possible to improve it by chatting in English with other people ?
How do you think?

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- Introduction
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi, everyone.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm a new here, and my purpose is to improve my English.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- In my school I don't have many chances to communicate with native speakers.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Is it possible to improve it by chatting in English with other people ?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- How do you think?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5