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My dream ...
I learned English at school a few years ago, but if we don't pratice English, we forgotten.
So, I decided to learn English myself, my level is not terrible.
I listen music a lot which enable me to acquire more vocabulary.
I wish left my job for living in England, but it's not easy.
I must to find a job and an apartment.
I'm really motivated and one day I will realize my dream ie speak English like you the native English countries. See you soon !

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- I learned English at school a few years ago, but if we don't pratice English, we forgotten.
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- So, I decided to learn English myself, my level is not terrible.
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- I listen music a lot which enable me to acquire more vocabulary.
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- I wish left my job for living in England, but it's not easy.
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- I must to find a job and an apartment.
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- I'm really motivated and one day I will realize my dream ie speak English like you the native English countries. See you soon !
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