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Car Sharing in Japan
read this news about car sharing in Japan.
It is very useful.
I might don't need a car.
http://sankei.jp.msn.com/west/west_economy/news/130801/wec13080116430007-n1.htm

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- Car Sharing in Japan
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- read this news about car sharing in Japan.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- It is very useful.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I might don't need a car.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- http://sankei.jp.msn.com/west/west_economy/news/130801/wec13080116430007-n1.htm
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4