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About my english course
hi My name is Renan I'm 21 years old.
I will wrinte about my english course.
It's nice I like, I learnied present and future, and how may you saw, I didn't learnied past kkk.
If you teach english pleas help me with anythings that you think interesting to me learn. thanks

标题
- About my english course
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- hi My name is Renan I'm 21 years old.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I will wrinte about my english course.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- It's nice I like, I learnied present and future, and how may you saw, I didn't learnied past kkk.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- If you teach english pleas help me with anythings that you think interesting to me learn. thanks
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4