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Liverpool
Hello everybody!
How are you today?
I continue my learning English and now I would like to speak you about my future voyage (I don't know if "voyage" is also a word in english).
I'm going to Liverpool next november, I'm so exciting for this voyage.
And I'm stressed too.
I'm afraid to not understand people, Liverpool is known for its accent.
The goal is talking English with people in English all the time.
So if many people can to learn and speak English, why not me ?
Good afternoon!

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- Liverpool
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문장 1
- Hello everybody!
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문장 2
- How are you today?
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문장 3
- I continue my learning English and now I would like to speak you about my future voyage (I don't know if "voyage" is also a word in english).
  투표하세요!
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문장 4
- I'm going to Liverpool next november, I'm so exciting for this voyage.
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문장 5
- And I'm stressed too.
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문장 6
- I'm afraid to not understand people, Liverpool is known for its accent.
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문장 7
- The goal is talking English with people in English all the time.
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문장 8
- So if many people can to learn and speak English, why not me ?
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문장 9
- Good afternoon!
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