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Hello
My name is Paul.
I live in Russia, my city is Moscow.
I am a student and in the future is going to take time of surgical-dental.
I want to learn English in order to practice abroad and still read comics in orginale, this is one of my little interest.
For sports and an active supporter of a healthy lifestyle.Happily, I will help in the study of Russian language.

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- My name is Paul.
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- I live in Russia, my city is Moscow.
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- I am a student and in the future is going to take time of surgical-dental.
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- I want to learn English in order to practice abroad and still read comics in orginale, this is one of my little interest.
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- For sports and an active supporter of a healthy lifestyle.Happily, I will help in the study of Russian language.
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