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My attitude
Hello, everybody!
I have just registered here, and I am going to learn Enlish persistently.
I am so upset and vexed, when after achieving new level in English I have to concentrate myself on other deals and forget many useful words and grammatic rules.
When I make two steps forward, I always make one step backward - and someimes it makes me angry.
I want to speak and write good English, my aim is to speak almost literary language.
I hope, I will be helped here.)

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- My attitude
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문장 1
- Hello, everybody!
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문장 2
- I have just registered here, and I am going to learn Enlish persistently.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I am so upset and vexed, when after achieving new level in English I have to concentrate myself on other deals and forget many useful words and grammatic rules.
  투표하세요!
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문장 4
- When I make two steps forward, I always make one step backward - and someimes it makes me angry.
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문장 5
- I want to speak and write good English, my aim is to speak almost literary language.
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문장 6
- I hope, I will be helped here.)
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6