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Hello !
Hello!
I'm 15 and on the one hand I would like to improve my English and on the other hand I can teach you french.
Why don't work together and become friends by the same occasion?

Dark-elfAugust 2013赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- Hello !
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm 15 and on the one hand I would like to improve my English and on the other hand I can teach you french.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Why don't work together and become friends by the same occasion?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3