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  • Abstract ('résumé' in French)

  • Previously public operator, France Telecom is now an international group, which must continuously improve its competitiveness in order to achieve its growth objectives.
  • Globalization and the opening of the telecommunications market, forced him to make deep changes in its approach to the market, as are in operation.
  • As part of my alternate training, I was required to join the team "Optimizing Operational Tasks" in the creation of new tools to help management and the creation of new controllers.
  • These missions within the team we need to work closely with applicants, users and interlocutors process experts and management.

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    • Previously public operator, France Telecom is now an international group, which must continuously improve its competitiveness in order to achieve its growth objectives.
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    • Globalization and the opening of the telecommunications market, forced him to make deep changes in its approach to the market, as are in operation.
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    • As part of my alternate training, I was required to join the team "Optimizing Operational Tasks" in the creation of new tools to help management and the creation of new controllers.
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    • These missions within the team we need to work closely with applicants, users and interlocutors process experts and management.
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