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SUNHOLIDAY
The sunholiday is very intesting , I want to play computer at all day and all night, it is very haoppy .
In sunholiday, I go to bed more than 8 hours every day.
I play computer game about 2 hours, and doing homework about 2 hours.
I like this sunholiday ////////~~(QAQ)

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문장 1
- The sunholiday is very intesting , I want to play computer at all day and all night, it is very haoppy .
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문장 2
- In sunholiday, I go to bed more than 8 hours every day.
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문장 3
- I play computer game about 2 hours, and doing homework about 2 hours.
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- I like this sunholiday ////////~~(QAQ)
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