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Text from fajo - English

  • Dream

  • Sometimes I think of the history of my life and I smile.
  • There were great moments like the birth of my offspring that I brought up, my loves and my friendships.
  • Now I live alone, that means I failed my married life surely because I made a lot of awkwardness.
  • Love is more important than the egoïsm.
  • I wish to come closer a man who understand me and can share my hobby, watch the seasons and age slowly, simply.

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