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A stranger in the plan (part I)
Once when the decision was taken, I took my suitcase and I'm gone to the airport.
My friend lives in Mancherster.
I'm going to visit her.
In the plane, a woman who travel with her husband was sit near me, she'd never take the plane and she'd afraid, while her husband travels often because of his job.
He didn't worry for his wife who panicked, he prefered read newspaper.
I took her hand and I told her not to worry.

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- Once when the decision was taken, I took my suitcase and I'm gone to the airport.
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문장 2
- My friend lives in Mancherster.
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문장 3
- I'm going to visit her.
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- In the plane, a woman who travel with her husband was sit near me, she'd never take the plane and she'd afraid, while her husband travels often because of his job.
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- He didn't worry for his wife who panicked, he prefered read newspaper.
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- I took her hand and I told her not to worry.
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