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Me
Hello!
My name is Hugo and I am 15 years old.
I lived in France near Paris (1 hour).
I would like improving my English by staying in American, English or Canadian family .
I have already travelled in the USA pennsylvannia In Pittsburgh.
If I am lucky enough to be able to you in France my family will make you discover the region (Eiffeil Tower, Arc de Triomphe etc.) and our specialities.
I am someone funny and who likes having fun.
Thank you for having read my announcement!

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- Hello!
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- My name is Hugo and I am 15 years old.
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- I lived in France near Paris (1 hour).
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- I would like improving my English by staying in American, English or Canadian family .
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- I have already travelled in the USA pennsylvannia In Pittsburgh.
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- If I am lucky enough to be able to you in France my family will make you discover the region (Eiffeil Tower, Arc de Triomphe etc.) and our specialities.
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- I am someone funny and who likes having fun.
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- Thank you for having read my announcement!
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