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In the Oceanarium，People clap for the dolphin performance, maybe you do not know that they will get depressed and nervous from the noise.
In the course of time , they will be in a bad condition.
So some of the dolphin trainer would not ready in advance for foods, but was kind of maalox or tagamet.
And they are used because dolphins get ulcers.
They are all stressed out.

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- In the Oceanarium，People clap for the dolphin performance, maybe you do not know that they will get depressed and nervous from the noise.
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- In the course of time , they will be in a bad condition.
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- So some of the dolphin trainer would not ready in advance for foods, but was kind of maalox or tagamet.
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- And they are used because dolphins get ulcers.
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- They are all stressed out.
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