Korekty

Text from ShirleyLin - English

  • The water was pollution after

  • The fishermen who are eating dolphin are poisoning themselves,but they are also poisoning the people that they are selling it to.
  • In the Japanese ,they called it Minamata disease as mercury poisoning.The most serious health risk of these high levels of mercury is to pregnant women, when their baby were growing up ,they can’t take care by themselves.
  • However, their bodies are different than normal people.
  • Some of them can’t hold their head up, can’t see and hear, speak and hard to eat、shake hands,It is difficult for them to move a single step.
  • In the fact , they look just like can not do anything that they want.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • The fishermen who are eating dolphin are poisoning themselves,but they are also poisoning the people that they are selling it to.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • In the Japanese ,they called it Minamata disease as mercury poisoning.The most serious health risk of these high levels of mercury is to pregnant women, when their baby were growing up ,they can’t take care by themselves.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • Some of them can’t hold their head up, can’t see and hear, speak and hard to eat、shake hands,It is difficult for them to move a single step.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5