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  • short essay:I am waiting

  • I am waiting someone who can see through my pretending.
  • I am waiting someone who can feel my sad.
  • I can be so strong until he appearance .
  • And then rub my tears away with his hand.
  • And say "I am here, you needn't cry.
  • I will protect you from now on".
  • I am waiting my price, but at last, i found that I am my price.
  • I can be so happy when I fact with the others.
  • I rub my tears when no one in there.
  • And then say"i can't cry, i don't want to be the weak".
  • Everyone will leave you for some reasons , besides yourself.

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