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I Went to a Japanese Restaurant
I went to a Japanese restaurant with my boss today.
I was surprised that Clerks were all Korean there, the dishes were delicious though.
It's been a while since I drunk miso-soup.

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- I Went to a Japanese Restaurant
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句子 1
- I went to a Japanese restaurant with my boss today.
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句子 2
- I was surprised that Clerks were all Korean there, the dishes were delicious though.
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句子 3
- It's been a while since I drunk miso-soup.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3