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  • Why study abroad?

  • PS: Please when you correct me, try to leave me a comment, why it's wrong in order to avoid the same mistake next time.
  • And thank you in advance.
  • People study abroad for variety of reasons.
  • Some people consider studying abroad as challenge and others as a new experience.
  • I think studying abroad would definitely give you many opportunities, like to acquire knowledge, making new friends and discovering new cultures and learning new languages, and most of it assuring better career.
  • First of all, knowledge is one of the best things can we get from studying abroad.
  • Learning from experts would definitely increase your information, especially when use the laboratories to practice what have you learned.
  • One example is when someone is studying chemistry, and after he finished his lesson, he needs a lab to practice what he had learned.
  • Otherwise, he’ll not learn it and understand it completely.
  • Furthermore, I think studying abroad would definitely let you make a lot of friends, especially international student.
  • By this you will not only benefit from knowing them, but by interacting with them, you will learn their cultures and most of that, you will learn new languages that would change your life.
  • Lastly, I believe that most of students who go studying abroad is they are looking to acquire a better career, because having better education and learning new languages, and having part time job, not only that, because after you finish your studies you’ll have an internship to apply what have you learned in the real world, which will give you an experience.
  • Thus would certainly qualify you to have a better job.
  • In conclusion, studying abroad is a great chance for student to explore the world while they’re learning.
  • However, it could be dangerous for them, if they didn’t have clear goals of what they want from it.
  • So, students before they go abroad, they need to set clear goals and how they will achieve them, in order to have advantage of it.

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    • I think studying abroad would definitely give you many opportunities, like to acquire knowledge, making new friends and discovering new cultures and learning new languages, and most of it assuring better career.
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    • Learning from experts would definitely increase your information, especially when use the laboratories to practice what have you learned.
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    • One example is when someone is studying chemistry, and after he finished his lesson, he needs a lab to practice what he had learned.
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    • By this you will not only benefit from knowing them, but by interacting with them, you will learn their cultures and most of that, you will learn new languages that would change your life.
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    • Lastly, I believe that most of students who go studying abroad is they are looking to acquire a better career, because having better education and learning new languages, and having part time job, not only that, because after you finish your studies you’ll have an internship to apply what have you learned in the real world, which will give you an experience.
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    • So, students before they go abroad, they need to set clear goals and how they will achieve them, in order to have advantage of it.
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