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Me
My name is Farah, i'm 15 years old.
I'm in the last year in the college and i would like be air hostess.
I like speak other languages and make travel.
I try to improve me in english because I love this language and I would like to spoken fluently english .
Correct me please :)

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- I'm in the last year in the college and i would like be air hostess.
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- I try to improve me in english because I love this language and I would like to spoken fluently english .
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