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I would like to have friens in the world !
Hi everybody in here , my name's Tony , I'm 19 years old and a second-years student in hospitality college .
I would like to practice englich with friends in the world.
I will be happy if you add my nick skype as your friends to talk , learn languages and discover cultures together .
I will be glad when I know every body !
my nick skype : tony.do79 thanks in advance ! Tony

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- Hi everybody in here , my name's Tony , I'm 19 years old and a second-years student in hospitality college .
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- I would like to practice englich with friends in the world.
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- I will be happy if you add my nick skype as your friends to talk , learn languages and discover cultures together .
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- I will be glad when I know every body !
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- my nick skype : tony.do79 thanks in advance ! Tony
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