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Hi
Yesturday it was my birthday.
It was first time for 6 years I celebrate it in Moscow.
Last year and 5 years before it I had feasted it in Crimea in student camp.
It was awesome, with my friends, sun, sea, music, full of flowers, grape, laugh and Khortytsia.
Next time I tell you about my birthday in this year.

Zolotapo4kaAugust 2013투표하세요!
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- Yesturday it was my birthday.
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- It was first time for 6 years I celebrate it in Moscow.
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- Last year and 5 years before it I had feasted it in Crimea in student camp.
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- It was awesome, with my friends, sun, sea, music, full of flowers, grape, laugh and Khortytsia.
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- Next time I tell you about my birthday in this year.
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