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The story
One day Bob told me about his family.
He grew up in a poor family.
And he had six brothers and sisters.
His father was a fishman.
He worked hard and he seldom came home.
Once, his two little sisters became ill.
It was a tuberculosis.
Bob's parents had not enough money for medicine and the girls died.
And then Bob decided to become an doctor.
He wanted to save people's lives.

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- One day Bob told me about his family.
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- He grew up in a poor family.
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- And he had six brothers and sisters.
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- His father was a fishman.
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- He worked hard and he seldom came home.
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- Once, his two little sisters became ill.
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- It was a tuberculosis.
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- Bob's parents had not enough money for medicine and the girls died.
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- And then Bob decided to become an doctor.
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- He wanted to save people's lives.
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