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從ANNICHI來的文本 - English

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My day.
Hi.
Today I have a great day.
It was sunny all day and my friends and I went for a walk in the local park.

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标题
- My day.
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句子 1
- Hi.
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句子 2
- Today I have a great day.
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句子 3
- It was sunny all day and my friends and I went for a walk in the local park.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3