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  • I'm a new one here~

  • Hi ,I'm Mily~I'm a freshman in college.I want to make friends with foreigners so I'm here~So glad~What's more,I want to improve my English.I plan to study in USA two years later,I am looking forward my new life in USA~

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    • Hi ,I'm Mily~I'm a freshman in college.I want to make friends with foreigners so I'm here~So glad~What's more,I want to improve my English.I plan to study in USA two years later,I am looking forward my new life in USA~
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