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today
Today, I feel free.
My brother is not at home, because he went to lilitary training in 3 day.
stay at home , i feel very quite,if m younger brother at home I feel very noisy.
But,he looks like very happy,because i think he make new friends in a new school.
Today,I very happy ,because a lot of friend send me the messages to me.

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句子 1
- Today, I feel free.
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句子 2
- My brother is not at home, because he went to lilitary training in 3 day.
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句子 3
- stay at home , i feel very quite,if m younger brother at home I feel very noisy.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- But,he looks like very happy,because i think he make new friends in a new school.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Today,I very happy ,because a lot of friend send me the messages to me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5