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  • Hello!I'm Yancy.
  • Affected by the movie called Confessions of A Shopaholic, I quite like shopping You know, a store can awaken a lust for things that you never know you needed.When your fingers grasp those shiny, new clothes, oh, yes, that's great.
  • Usually I'm not going to shop clothes on the Internet.But I like shopping books on the Net cos they're much cheaper than they're sold in physical stores.
  • Most of clothes I bought from the Internet are in bad quality and the staffs showed on the pictures are different from the real ones,which lets you down.
  • My favorite store is Zara,which is the flagship chain store of Inditex Group owed by Spanish tycoon Amancio Ortega.
  • The clothes in that store is a little expensive for me now.
  • But if I had a job then I can afford it.
  • The point is the quality is worth the price and their styles match their colours ,which makes them fashionable.
  • The last thing I like about shopping is that I can't afford what I want 。 Actually，in GuangZhou ，the most popular place to shop is Teemall and ZhenJia Square。 Do you like shopping?If you do , talk about it.

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    • Affected by the movie called Confessions of A Shopaholic, I quite like shopping You know, a store can awaken a lust for things that you never know you needed.When your fingers grasp those shiny, new clothes, oh, yes, that's great.
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    • Usually I'm not going to shop clothes on the Internet.But I like shopping books on the Net cos they're much cheaper than they're sold in physical stores.
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    • Most of clothes I bought from the Internet are in bad quality and the staffs showed on the pictures are different from the real ones,which lets you down.
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    • My favorite store is Zara,which is the flagship chain store of Inditex Group owed by Spanish tycoon Amancio Ortega.
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    • The last thing I like about shopping is that I can't afford what I want 。 Actually，in GuangZhou ，the most popular place to shop is Teemall and ZhenJia Square。 Do you like shopping?If you do , talk about it.
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