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A letter to my uncle
Dear my uncle Today I feel comfortable because I feel like many things changed very much, I mean that I have many developed points.
Before moving here,I was a person without job,I felt it’s hard to have some money to buy what I want expect your money.
I felt it’s really difficult to work in a company as an officer.
At the time I begin to work for this job, I’m very scared and worried about my qualification.
But whenever I undergo each different job, I feel I become more mature, I can find money for myself.

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- A letter to my uncle
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문장 1
- Dear my uncle Today I feel comfortable because I feel like many things changed very much, I mean that I have many developed points.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Before moving here,I was a person without job,I felt it’s hard to have some money to buy what I want expect your money.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I felt it’s really difficult to work in a company as an officer.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- At the time I begin to work for this job, I’m very scared and worried about my qualification.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- But whenever I undergo each different job, I feel I become more mature, I can find money for myself.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5