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  • My Favourite Mall

  • Hello!Everyone,It's yancy again。 Here I want to talk about my favourite mall, ZhenJia plaza.It's located right in the heart of downtown GuangZhou and is just a stone's throw away from my English School.Ths mall is huge.It's 9 storeys high and looks really exquisite.There're many boutiques, cosmetics sections and exotic restaurants.One day , my friend and I went to ZhenJia plaza not because of their clothes but there're a shiny skating rink and a new aquarium On the 6th floor.We took a lots of pictures of those tropical fish and smll sharks.The most attractive fish is called sting rays.They have big spine, which makes them look like they can fly in the water.I guess that's why the audience called they "flying fish".We also took some 3-D pictures with sharks.The mall is a landmark in GuangZhou,and the service it offered is meeting all ranges of the age.Welcome everyone to here!Haha.

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    • Hello!Everyone,It's yancy again。 Here I want to talk about my favourite mall, ZhenJia plaza.It's located right in the heart of downtown GuangZhou and is just a stone's throw away from my English School.Ths mall is huge.It's 9 storeys high and looks really exquisite.There're many boutiques, cosmetics sections and exotic restaurants.One day , my friend and I went to ZhenJia plaza not because of their clothes but there're a shiny skating rink and a new aquarium On the 6th floor.We took a lots of pictures of those tropical fish and smll sharks.The most attractive fish is called sting rays.They have big spine, which makes them look like they can fly in the water.I guess that's why the audience called they "flying fish".We also took some 3-D pictures with sharks.The mall is a landmark in GuangZhou,and the service it offered is meeting all ranges of the age.Welcome everyone to here!Haha.
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