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HomeWe've moved to a new apartment just 2 months ago.Our apartment is on the 21st floor.There're 4 bedrooms ,one big living room, one rest room, one shower room as well as a roomy kitchen.Particularly, my father picked a spacious bedroom,it's probably about 40 meters square.His bedroom contains a space for bed, a living room with sofas , a mini study as well as a rest room.However ,my elder sister and I share a bedroom, my three younger brothers share the other two bedrooms.I quite like my bedroom,even though it's not big, it's still lovely.We have a wardrobe ,a dresser and a suitable bed.There're advantages and disadvantages of sharing a room.

We not only share a bedroom but also share beautiful clothes and interesting storys.My sister is a business woman so she always tells me something interesting that happend in her shop and I usually tell her something that happend in school.But my sister doesn't like studying so sometimes I waste a lot of time chatting .What's worse,sometimes I am woken up by her annoying ringtone at night.In a whole, our apartment is a suitable place to live.