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my farm
when i studed in university , I had agriculture practic in GB.
I worked in farm which grow potatoes, onions and salat.
Next year after return I visited Poland.
Here I havester apple and pear.
Now my family have own arrable land on which we grow potatoes.
I have my own tractor, two-rurrow piow and trailer for the tractor.
I would like to get new skills in another country to apply in my little farm.

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- when i studed in university , I had agriculture practic in GB.
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- I worked in farm which grow potatoes, onions and salat.
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- Next year after return I visited Poland.
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- Here I havester apple and pear.
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- Now my family have own arrable land on which we grow potatoes.
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- I have my own tractor, two-rurrow piow and trailer for the tractor.
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- I would like to get new skills in another country to apply in my little farm.
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