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My Best Friend
Hi, everyone!
Today I will talk about my friend!
I hope don't to do mistakes!
=) I have a best friend, her name is Juliana.
She is 19 years old, and studant in a college.
Ju, is my classmate ;) Every day we go at college together and talking about many thinks.
On weekends we love go to the beach and go out at night.
Her especially hability is cooking!
=) She's a lovely friend and I want never lost her! That's it! =)

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- Hi, everyone!
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- Today I will talk about my friend!
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- =) I have a best friend, her name is Juliana.
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- She is 19 years old, and studant in a college.
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- Ju, is my classmate ;) Every day we go at college together and talking about many thinks.
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- On weekends we love go to the beach and go out at night.
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- Her especially hability is cooking!
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- =) She's a lovely friend and I want never lost her! That's it! =)
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