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If you want a job doing properly, do it yourself.
Lately when ı studied English I come across a question which asked my opinion about an idiom.
The idiom is "If you want a job doing properly , do it yourself." I tried to answer it with my humble English but couldnt make a solid point and got upset.
The reason I got upset is that I' ve been studying English for years but still cant express my thoughts clearly.
I don't know how long will it take me to do it properly but I'm getting fed up with it.
Anyway, I will try to make my point about it in writing later.
One way or another I' going to do it.
I'm determined.

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- If you want a job doing properly, do it yourself.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Lately when ı studied English I come across a question which asked my opinion about an idiom.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- The idiom is "If you want a job doing properly , do it yourself." I tried to answer it with my humble English but couldnt make a solid point and got upset.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- The reason I got upset is that I' ve been studying English for years but still cant express my thoughts clearly.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I don't know how long will it take me to do it properly but I'm getting fed up with it.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- Anyway, I will try to make my point about it in writing later.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- One way or another I' going to do it.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I'm determined.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7