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I need to improve my english!
I am a Business Administration student, actually I am in fifth semester, I need to improve my english because i want to finish my university in New York.
I think that in this page I can practice a lot of english.
:) If you want to learn spanish, or maybe practice the language, you can send me a email, I will be happy to hel you!

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- I need to improve my english!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- I am a Business Administration student, actually I am in fifth semester, I need to improve my english because i want to finish my university in New York.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I think that in this page I can practice a lot of english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- :) If you want to learn spanish, or maybe practice the language, you can send me a email, I will be happy to hel you!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3