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An Idıom
I mentioned about an Idiom before, that is If you want a job done properly, do it yourself.
Today I want to make my point about it.
I believe the Idiom is right and my explanation to it is that ıf someone does something for another person, he will be doing it as a favor or for something in return.
That's why he won't elaborate on it and the outcome will eventually be bad.
So I'd prefer to do it myself in the first place instead of fixing a work which hasn't been done properly.

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- An Idıom
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- I mentioned about an Idiom before, that is If you want a job done properly, do it yourself.
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- Today I want to make my point about it.
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- I believe the Idiom is right and my explanation to it is that ıf someone does something for another person, he will be doing it as a favor or for something in return.
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- That's why he won't elaborate on it and the outcome will eventually be bad.
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- So I'd prefer to do it myself in the first place instead of fixing a work which hasn't been done properly.
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