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Hi family H., How are you?I'm fine.
Do you remember me?
I'm veronica , form Italy.
I spend one(beautiful) week by you.
I remember you with joy, you were so kindly with me, Ambra and Monica!
And you, "mom", when dinner was ready you said loud"girls!!!" you were so nice!
And your delicious backed beans!
I still thinking of you all, and about the good time that I spent by you. hope to hear from you again soon. Veronica.

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- And you, "mom", when dinner was ready you said loud"girls!!!" you were so nice!
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- I still thinking of you all, and about the good time that I spent by you. hope to hear from you again soon. Veronica.
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