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  • Write an email to ask some advice about your new purchase of c

  • Dear Jacques, I’m writing you to ask some advice, but first i hope you’re good, this is a long time that i haven’t had some news about you, what do you become ? how is your new job ? let me know quickly.
  • So i don’t remmeber if i had said that, but i want to buy a new car, but you know me…i’m too bad on this topic ! you can speak with me about sport or travel, but for the cars….
  • I would buy a big car, because i have had three childrens with Isabel and our currently car is too small now…I have seen a lot of kind of cars which would be good but i need your point of view.
  • French car ?, american car ?
  • I don’t know, i don’t want a sportive car, i prefer comfortable car, it’s better for me and my family.
  • And other question, if i want to sell my car, it’s a Megan from Renault, how much i will sell it ?
  • If my memory is good you have sold this kind of car there were two years ago.
  • In short i wait your advice, i look forward to hearing you.
  • Best regards my friend

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • Dear Jacques, I’m writing you to ask some advice, but first i hope you’re good, this is a long time that i haven’t had some news about you, what do you become ? how is your new job ? let me know quickly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • So i don’t remmeber if i had said that, but i want to buy a new car, but you know me…i’m too bad on this topic ! you can speak with me about sport or travel, but for the cars….
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I would buy a big car, because i have had three childrens with Isabel and our currently car is too small now…I have seen a lot of kind of cars which would be good but i need your point of view.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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  • câu 5
    • I don’t know, i don’t want a sportive car, i prefer comfortable car, it’s better for me and my family.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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